loss of innocents

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Thursday, 03-Jan-2008 3:15:00

You smell like danger.
Such a sexy sent
Makes me crazy, drives me insane.
Your not good for me,
yet your the poison I crave in my veins.
You will show my heart to bleed.
I should run to the light but I find solace in your darkness.
my cure is in the pain you create for me.
There is no escape from your gaze.
I should of never looked directly into your black soul,
but the crystal shimmer from your cold frozen heart and the sent of impending
doom caught my attention.
Drink of my innocents as it spills from my prudent soul.
I'm tainted as you cover me in your sin.
If your darkness claims me before the day returns my debt shall be paid in full with my soul and all that remain are the painted shadows on the wall depicting my innocents as it fades.

Post 2 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 03-Jan-2008 6:50:48

Very good.

The phrase "I'm tainted as you cover me in your sin." is both threatening and yet alluring.

Bob

Post 3 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Monday, 11-Feb-2008 15:12:21

Quite romantic.